Eyes of Molten Beauty

by Beautiful Chaos   Jan 20, 2008


Her gaze could light a fire,
Though rain falls from the sky,
Mesmerizing from first glance,
Such comfort as you die.

A fierce and blazing blue,
Flecks of silver dust,
Asthough she were an angel,
Reach for her you must.

Basking in her splendor,
You know not of her face,
If one day you meet again,
Those eyes shall be your grace.

Singed into your soul,
Time will not forget,
The beauty found inside the fire,
Eyes without regret.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    -Her gaze could light a fire,
    Though rain falls from the sky,
    Mesmerizing from first glance,
    Such comfort as you die.-
    ^This was a nice start, first line didn't catch my attention too much but in the second and third line you started to build a truly interesting and intense rhythm but somehow (this is just my opinion) fourth line totally threw me off. It doesn't feet with the rest of that stanza.

    I think that this poem would be even much better without rhymes cause your rhyming seems forced and it ruined the flow for me but I don't want to offend you, I actually and honestly enjoyed in this poem.
    You have good choice of words and you mixed vivid imagery with excellently expressed emotions and I truly like that.

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