by Abu3li Jan 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Thank you so much for the trust |
by Rin
Aren't friends just the best!? |
by Shinobi
This poem is another piece that many can relate to. We come across many fake "friends" who make us believe that they care. The flow here was a bit rocky because of all the slang you used. I think that if you wrote it in a high level language it would sound better. Nice work 4/5 |
by N J Thornton
I get an overwhelming sense of sarcasm with this poem, which makes me want to laugh. I know it's a serious subject but it's funny. |
Splendid poem, very touching, very beautiful, you don't have many poems here but all of them are very unique and suits my type |
by Alexander
The use of words could be slightly better. Don't get me wrong it is a good poem and has very good potention, but i think with just a little more time and tweaking it could be much better. You have good potentional. 4/5 |