FiRE

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Jan 20, 2008


Spark, spark, spark; heat falls upon summer.
Flames of a young fire in its beginning stage.
Stir in the explosives, to make it blaze, make it last, it wants to survive.
Says no harm and platonic in feelings, but its future so ruinous.

As time passes, the flames more powerful.
It kindles with a great silhouette.
Thunder strikes with flames like Hades;
Enduring, tenacious, and just magnificent.

It glows a bright crimson, flickers a bright gold.
Strengthens in power and spirit, what was so little, now an inferno.
Suddenly the climate alters, but the flames still burn with envy.
Though raindrops will fall, slight showers, it attempts to remain strong;
It wants to hold on.

Exterior's so sweet, interior's so harsh.
You'll see innocence, but inside you'll feel pain.
Wet droplets are its burden;
they just keep falling, descending with no guide.

Slowly the seasons are changing; becoming a year now, and its winter.
Breezes so cold, the fire won't last forever.
Time showers hail and snow of hatred and brutality.
Now the flames are dying, faster and faster.

What use to be a beauty, now into ashes.
What was once perfect, now is dead.
And the remains- swept by the wind.

Now we wait till the next equinox, to watch another fire begin.
And hear those last words- spark, spark, spark.

© 2008 Tammy.

A poem written by my cousin. .Feedback please?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really loved this poem for all the right reasons the message was great the story in itself was profoundly created and with a touch of imagination it left the reader in awe great piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    OMG. Please tell your cousin to join the site, cause this poem was absolutely amazing! :) I really love the repetition of "spark, spark, spark", it was really unique and creative. The flow was flawless and the emotions were intense. Amazing job! Overall: 5.5

    - Steph.

    By the way - I know you told me to R/R/C Her Cliche Tragedies, but I've already done that one, so I just picked another one of your poems. :) I hope that was alright.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    The imagery was excellent, i loved how you expressed it so beautifully. Awesome job!

    tiff

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    The fire remined me of humens. the rain aeem to be in the way of a goal. I can tell u have a wide vocabulary:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    I loved it... but then again i love fire... very good...

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