by FlawlesslyTarnished Jan 20, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Spark, spark, spark; heat falls upon summer. |
by Robert
I really loved this poem for all the right reasons the message was great the story in itself was profoundly created and with a touch of imagination it left the reader in awe great piece |
by Stephanie
OMG. Please tell your cousin to join the site, cause this poem was absolutely amazing! :) I really love the repetition of "spark, spark, spark", it was really unique and creative. The flow was flawless and the emotions were intense. Amazing job! Overall: 5.5 |
by Tiffany
The imagery was excellent, i loved how you expressed it so beautifully. Awesome job! |
by Aussie
The fire remined me of humens. the rain aeem to be in the way of a goal. I can tell u have a wide vocabulary:) |
I loved it... but then again i love fire... very good... |