Comments : The Beach

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A beautiful poem, reminds me of my walks on the beach, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Awh, sad. But still loving. I know how you feel. Really well written. 5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by penguinLex

    I liked it a lot XD but i think the layout of it all needs a bit of a work out.
    I loved the words though. Great Job!

    Lex

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Oooo i like this a lot, its so beautiful, but so sad... the writing is dantie... like you wrote the poem in the sand... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Amazing. and yes, you do have that god given right, hunni!!!! xoxoxox