Whispers of a Broken Heart

by jLegendc   Jan 20, 2008


I've deeply fallen in love with you,
When I said I love you,
I just wished you'd say you love me too...

I gave you my heart,
But you tore it apart,
I open my arms for you,
But when I tried to hug you,
My hands just passed through...

My heart was the only treasure I have left,
And still you wrecked it into pieces,
NOw my life is a mess...

I have lost everything now,
You know how,
If only you tried to understand,
ALl these feelings inside of this man...

Everytime you call out my name,
I always feel sorrow and pain,
My heart felt like it was thrown into the flames,
Although you did this,
It's only myself that I blame...

I still love you deeply,
Try to measure it,
It will continue to infinity,
I still accepted you for who you are,
And always thought we'd go so far,
I've loved you from the start,
Try to listen to the whispers of a broken heart...

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  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    I LOVE THIS!!
    I HAVE FELT LIKE THIS BEFORE... THIS POEM IS GREATLY WRITTEN!!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Dat wuz beautiful...very cute and sweet...hope she'll notice and return the love u have for her..

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    The last line was amazing and perfectly ended the poem. I really like the descriptive words you used. This is a poem I could read more than once and still enjoy just as much. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was alright. it did seemed a lil off flow but other than that the poem was intresting. i did enjoy it

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The title really drew me and the contain is really emotional...
    This poem is really catchy and I enjoy this very much...
    Especially the last stanza, I love it very much
    You really know how to write
    5/5 for sure!!!

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