Saying Goodbye

by Angeleea   Jan 20, 2008


Now I Stand Here Crying
As I Look Down Upon The Blood
The Tears From All The Dying
Look As Though There Was A Flood
The Loss Of Family And Friends
To Some Some Very Bitter Ends
And Now My Time Is Coming
For I'm Tired Of Running
Running From My Inner Fears
And Hiding All My Tears
For All You Do Is Scare Me Anymore More
And Force Me To Lock The Door
And As I Look Upon The Blood
I Become Awake And Realize
That Within This Flood
All I See Are My Own Eyes
The Blood I See Upon The Floor
Is Only Mine And Mine Alone
I Look Down And See Another Chore
I Start To Cry As I Condone
All The Mistakes That I Have Made
Five More Minutes Please Give Me
But In The End I Guess I Was Just To Wait
As I Apologize To My Family
And Say Sorry To My Friends
For All In All I'm The Enemy
For Bringing Upon My Bitter End
They'll Bury Me In A Week
And Mourn For Years To Come
But Because My Strength Was Very Meek
I've Already Ended And I'm Done

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  • 16 years ago

    by TAYLOR

    Love this poem :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexander

    I must say of your poems that i have read so far this is my favorite. It says something that can make the reader actually feel what the person in the poem was feeling at the time. Your word choice was also very good, and the flow was only broken a few times. One thing you might want ot work on though is re-reading the poem for mistakes. Keep up the good work and you can go far. 5/5

    Signed,
    Alexander