I must say of your poems that i have read so far this is my favorite. It says something that can make the reader actually feel what the person in the poem was feeling at the time. Your word choice was also very good, and the flow was only broken a few times. One thing you might want ot work on though is re-reading the poem for mistakes. Keep up the good work and you can go far. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander

Love this poem :D