Im sry

by Darien   Jan 20, 2008


I'm Sorry

Im sorry im not perfect.
I have my flaws
and that'll never change.
I can't change who i am!

I'm sorry my life is messed up
and i saw a lot of things i shouldnt have seen.
Its not my fault
but ill take the blame and apologize.

Im sorry i give myself eraser burns
to ease the pain of my depression.
I want to stop i just dont know how.

I'm sorry i get an attitude every once in awhile.
Its not like i have one all the time
like my sister!

I'm sorry i cant always put up with your stuff!
A person can only take so much
and i take more then you can!

I'm sorry for being me
but im not gonna change!
because for the most part
im content with who i am!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    Excellent..... well done and very organized

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    I agree with Letty that you should work on your capitalization and such. I think you have a good basic start to a poem, but it wouldn't hurt to colour it up a little bit with some different words. Throw some imagery in there too, if you're feeling up to it.

    Good start, good effort, and good luck.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    The concept of this poem was very beautiful Darien, but you need to work on your capitalization, grammar, and punctuation. The single letter i should always be capitalized in a sentence ( I ). The first letter of each new sentence should also be capitalized, and without punctuation it is hard to follow the flow of the poem. The poem itself is beautiful. I could only imagine what was going through your mind when you wrote. I think that you have a lot of potential, and with a little help, you can go on to be the magnificent poet that I believe you can be. I look forward to working with you once this club is on its way. Check your messages every now in again for updates.

    Letty

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