by Darien Jan 20, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
4 Months |
by Jason
This poem is written good for a short poem. I would give it a 5 (and not a 4) if there weren't little mistakes in it. But if I ignore those little mistakes, it's a great poem with the love flow within it. It could get better when you expand on the thoughts dealing with the guy you admire. |