4 Months

by Darien   Jan 20, 2008


4 Months

Its finally here
our 4 month anniversary
i hope it aint our last
I never thought we would make it this far
but we proved me wrong
im so happy were still together
i love you with all my heart
u mean the world to me
i never want to let you go
we're the perfect couple
just in a not so perfect situation
long distance is hard
but we're making it work

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    This poem is written good for a short poem. I would give it a 5 (and not a 4) if there weren't little mistakes in it. But if I ignore those little mistakes, it's a great poem with the love flow within it. It could get better when you expand on the thoughts dealing with the guy you admire.

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