I love this poem.It was very original.The word choice was excellent and the flow was good.Very good job.5/5

<3Amber

The message behind the poem is one of value. Also your word choice was excelent. The only thing that i see wrong is the flow. I mean all together the flow is good, but in a few parts it just seems a bit off. Keep up the good work and you could go far. 4/5

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Alexander

Great poem nice and simple but you got the message across...great work!!.=)..5/5

I think this poem is well written. You incorporate everyday vernacular without being too informal. The advice is wise and the composition is clear. :)
If you get a chance, can you read mine? I just joined and submitted my first poems today...
thanks

Woow this is a really great poem. it is very well said well written. 5/5
kasia

Well written. Gives alot of insight into real life situations which makes it even more of a treat too read. The flow was pretty good and the well the stanzas went along in a sorta song like way was nice too. 5/5

Recently I had to get my ex girlfriend to break up with her boyfriend to go back out with me because we were in love again and she was cheating on him. I think you wrote this about a girl dumping her boyfriend for you. Is that wrong?

Lovely
I loved this poem a lot! The way it was kind of like a spoken word for me and it had a beat and rhythm. Those are my favorite! I loved how you had some rhyme but you weren't trying to hard. Nothing really to fix the last line was a bit off flow but the words were good so I really don't know how you would fix that. But otherwise it was a very enjoyable read. 5/5
kaila

I really love the story of this poem...
The flow was really great...
It is brilliantly written by you!!!
Definitely 5/5

I like this poem alot. i like the way the poem is told from another person point of view like in a story. its rlly different n a rlly intresting poem. great write

Nice One..and very well written...flow was amazin too.....

it reminds me of a friend who was havin the same problem with her girl friend...and sumhow i know what ur tryin to say...

and il read and comment only ur poems that is not related to love poems..its blocked it my office..but il read those later once i got home..

Hmm well i guess this is one of a GREAT opinion.. very cool and trully feelings.. the emotions was absolutely great! i love how u started the poem seems the impact of this poet carried all the great and fabulous emotions.. its nice to read this kind of poet coz i had pick some lessons that i can relate it... great job 5/5

This poem's subject is one that many can relate to. The structure here was solid, but didn't match the rhyming method. The rhymes didn't appear in most of the cases. Although that, your choosing of words expressed true emotions, and that what made it good. Nice work 5/5

Very Unique and well written.