I love the real you

by Steven   Jan 21, 2008


You may be a great lover
who brings me flowers
and cookies when ever i cry alone at night
that's what makes you special

you may be a great dancer
who shows his moves for the ladies and males
your moves might be slick
but your always gonna be dancing forever

you may be a great ladies man
who shows his caring side to ladies
who seem to not know a single thing about you
but your always giving them a love like no other

you may be boring book nerd
who covers his four eyes with books and online stories
your smarts is what drives them crazy
your thinking skills is what keeps a girl safe and well

you may be a great cook
who cooks wonderful meals each day for people
people might cry when they see your food
but they will always remember that sweet taste of you

you may be a great poem writer
who writes so much about love and romance
even when people don't know your face, but just a name
you will always tell people, what falling in love is like

the poem with words used twice
letters parted in lines up close
the real you is what i love most
that is what makes this poem a interesting piece of art work

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    I like the repetitiveness but the poem drifts and wavers abit at the end.
    try to keep the main idea through the full poem,i know i shouldnt be talking as i tend to waver as well.but its just a suggestion
    great work nonetheless keep it up!
    Lisa