Darkness be my friend,
And I'll be the ghost of you,
Take my sorrow and my sadness,
Long before I bid my adieu.

This was my favorite stanza.
You have penned a beautiful poem here!

I once was lost in darkness too until an angel came my way...it never returned to me again!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This was so so good, gosh. i loved the title, and how your poem was set out, unusual but effective.

5/5 david

This is really dark, i hope things are ok with you.

all the best and take care

Sam
I really missed reading your poems. I have also missed you :) You have done a wonderful job with this. I really relate to so much of the piece.

Darkness by my friend,
For the hand of a ghost I am holding,
Longing to find a love long lost,
His name I'll forever be calling,

This stanza really grabbed me.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

This is gorgeous
xx

you've still got is sam