by Brittany Jan 21, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Temptation does not need words, |
Hay, I loved this poem, |
by she
Good flow,very unique,awsum |
by Alexander
This is a magnificent piece of work. There is a message hidden in it that is amazing. The only thing that i see that may be wrong with is is the punctuation. I mean the flow is great but the commas make you pause in some places that you shouldn't. All together though it is wonderful. 5/5 |