Wow...
I like everything about this poems. it's different from anything I've read before, so powerful from the beginning to the end. The imagery that you created is priceless- truly endlessly effective. Rhythm and flow of the whole piece are also flawless. Greatly written, so unique and refreshing. I read it three times by now and tried to find favorite part but the whole poem is simply brilliant!
Keep writing!

Wow...
Amazingly done, so powerful, every word is so unique and chosen on fantastic way. Bravo, this poem is brilliant.

Ooh, its super cute. Its simple and amazing. =D

This was really unique and original. I loved the concept behind it, interesting and creative. What I liked most about this was how unusal it is.. A different read from what I am used to so really enjoyable. Your word choice is descriptive and vivid which held a strong effect over me. The flow smoothe, almost chant like. I still can't get over the idea of this poem, it's really amazing how you have created something this intense and extreme. Overall a fantastic poem which amused me deeply. Well done. ~Mel

I haven't read this kind of poems.. it's rare and quite good.. everything rhyme and it had a flow even for this kind of writing.. nice one yo =]

I honestly haven’t read anything like this. It’s outrageous. I LOVE it. (:

The beginning to this piece seemed rather subtle (until the KABLAM) in contrast to the main body of the poem, where you clearly and effectively apply powerful imagery. The rhyme is consistent and there is a flawless flow throughout the piece.

“Colors leaking
Ideas streaking
Nude into the night
Thoughts provoking
Angry pens smoking
Before an inky fight”

Beautifully worded, I must say. Your choice of language helps convey an extremely busy mindset, and you successfully portray your thoughts. The ending is abrupt and almost harsh, but there’s nothing wrong with that. I actually like it like that. (:

No criticism here mate. This is a distinctively written piece – well done, mate :).
x

This was really cool. i love the chaotic pictures it paints! almost seems a bit like what being high must be like, in a poem, but the rhythm keeps it together.

Wow...thats a very interesting poem!! Very full of details that makes the poem come to life! Awesome!!

Keep it up =n= Take care!!

KABLAM- This piece is exploding with creativity. It is very interesting and as unique as the author who wrote it.

This was a very different poem, than what i have read, and it rhymed pretty well, it was short, but i guess everything was alright, 5/5

Yep insane, but so inviting

This is indeed insane
and i love every word of it

Wow...I have to read your next poem.

Your stream of consciousness flows freely but thoughtfully. Random and lucid, excellent.

Very interesting, i really enjoyed reading this piece
Great job here lol

Thouroughly enjoyable and truly beyond description. A piece that speaks to the way I assume we all get at around 3:00 in the morning when sleep has thumbed its nose.

Haha,
nice.
It reminds me of my sugared hyped friend.
Good job!

Bit random but great

I really like this poems, reminds me of early beatnick poetry, raw and stark