All Forgiven

This was really short again but honestly though you did a good job of writing, i really like this one the message i got out of this is that no matter what happens with one of your friends or some one you care about no matter how long it will take you'll always forgive them in some way., you might not forget what this person did to you but yet you can't really stand not being with them or around them. thats what i got out of this poem.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Gr8 poem, it flows well. i like how u use odd words:)

I loved the truth behind this poem .. it was real meaningful. I'm sure many can relate with what you said which made it even more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

I really enjoyed this poem, I found it to be quite inspiring to tell you the truth and it held so much truth behind each line. The message is powerful and caught my attention. Definitly an interesting poem. I loved the way you expressed yourself through your words, very deep and emotion pack. This was an amazing poem. Well done. 5/5 from me of course. ~Mel

Very intense piece and whole message is truly deep. I like how you wrote this some lines are so powerful and I truly enjoyed in every part of the poem. You express your self greatly, well done!