Very well written...I really liked the way you put it together.....funny how things compare....

:( Is this about her..? Gaahhh. I'm sorry if it is Jenna.. I still do believe you can live with me (: Ba ha ha. I love you<3 Chin up.

Wow!!! This is a very powerful, strong, emotional poem. I think it's great; even though it has a few bumps that needs smoothing. Some lines run on a little bit longer than the others and some are very, very short. I know that is probably how you wanted it to be read, but it's kind of distracting. You also need to work on your capitalization. Those are the only few suggestions that I have because the poem speaks for itself. It is very sad and emotional. You have done a great job. Pat yourself on the back.

Letty