Good job.....keep up the good work.....oh, and your not a disaster by far...:)

This poem; reminds me of a modle for some reason? Like as I was reading; The way you were wording things; made me think of all the people in this world right now, who say who they are; when really, its who they're not. Like Models for instance; I have nothing against them. But will they ever really be themselves? They have new images constantly. & Half of them, are in nude.. So really, whats the point? Wow, anyways. Seeee? Your poems are good Jenna. You get the point across that you want, AND you get the mind thinking beyond things. Good Job. (: