by Beautiful Chaos Jan 21, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Imagination churning, |
by RobinAnn13
I liked this one but it had more issues then your poetry usually has. You switched rhyme schemes halfway through the poem and in the 2nd line, 3rd stanza, "they" should probably be "the" |
by hadia
It flows so well, i like it! |