Imagine

by Beautiful Chaos   Jan 21, 2008


Imagination churning,
My mind is slowly burning,
When will we stop yearning?
Wanting evermore.

The heart's a fickle friend,
If never it does mend,
Hatred can extend,
And kill what we adore.

Imagine there's no colour,
They world has turned to grey,
Blending in with everything,
That hate would find a way.

Though there'd be no difference,
In what it is you see,
The heart that beats within,
Knows what cannot be.

(it doesn't feel finished yet)

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I liked this one but it had more issues then your poetry usually has. You switched rhyme schemes halfway through the poem and in the 2nd line, 3rd stanza, "they" should probably be "the"
    I liked the storyline of this one but it only gets a 4/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    It flows so well, i like it!

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