by Beautiful Chaos Jan 21, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
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Imagination churning, |
by RobinAnn13
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I liked this one but it had more issues then your poetry usually has. You switched rhyme schemes halfway through the poem and in the 2nd line, 3rd stanza, "they" should probably be "the" |
by hadia
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It flows so well, i like it! |