Comments : Imagine

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    It flows so well, i like it!

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I liked this one but it had more issues then your poetry usually has. You switched rhyme schemes halfway through the poem and in the 2nd line, 3rd stanza, "they" should probably be "the"
    I liked the storyline of this one but it only gets a 4/5 from me.