Love it
especially the ending
about the tears being human, not weakness
that is so true.
great job.
xx

Excellent work and amazing ending. It's very insiteful and true. You have definitely got my vote and i hope i have yours!

4/5

~Chinwe~

Awsome poem truly beautiful I truly love it (^_^) 5/5

Amazing poem hunni.
I know i can relate to it.
And.. i'm sure many more, but by including your grandpa in this..it kinda made it your own story. i was just like this. actually...i kinda still am. I still believe crying makes me weak, but...i KNOW it doesn't. i just... i don't know, this isn't about me anyway.
I'm glad you came to realization of this...and i'm glad you could get this all out. i could feel your emotions coming out in this piece. its wonderful. But...i really don't like the last line of this, i feel like it...kinda makes it weak, to me, the ending should be the most powerful part. Thats just me. Thank you for sharing! You did a wonderful job! keep it up!

Wow, that was really really good.
I liked how it was a story.
It had a great flow.
I really liked the part about tears not making her weak, but human, a really good ending.
5/5 for sure :)
Keep it up
xx

OMG. Wondeful. I used to tell myself that so I wouldn't break down. And then I'd hide in my bedroom and let it all out.
5/5

I really like your poem, it's beautiful.

Wow such a very well written beautiful poem.......5/5

This is by far the best i've read. mostly because i can relate it to my life literally. i couldn't cry at all or let any emotions show. and my grandpa died and i still couldn't. thank you for sharing this poem. it made my day to know i'm not alone. thank you. read mine?? "broken down road" "beginnings"

I REALLY like this poem...going straight on my favorites, very sad but i see all the meaning you put into it:D