I felt that way after my boyfriend left'd me for someone else but/ anyways great poems the your
flow was on point and your vocab was great...=)...5/5

Grate poem!
Sounds to me like your riding that roller coaster of life,nice job of expressing it.

Nowhere to run
No place to hide,
Life seems like an ocean without a tide.
Feeling trapped in myself
No one hears my screams,
I can only break free in my dreams.

^^ That was my favorite stanza. Wraps it up well. I enjoyed it because its so true, and so relatable. I liked your choice of wording and your rhyme scheme was great. The only thing is that the flow was slightly off, like, the longer lines, dont flow as smoothly into the shorter lines. If that makes ANY sense? But yeh apart from that a really good write. Nice work, its descriptive and powerful. 5/5

Amazing! I can totally realte to this poem.. I guess i am in this position now!!... You have great talent! Keep writing :)