"And now I don't know what defines me
And without you, I see myself as nobody;
Because together. We are one."
^ I absolutely love this stanza. It was so unique and creative.
As the writer, I'm sure this poem was talking about something in specific for you, but as I was reading, it made me relate to some things as well. Which is why I love it - It allowed me to think. (: Also, I love how you slightly altered the 1st stanza at the end. Creative thinking. ;) Overall: 5.5