by Viola
Perfect. I LOVE it. Sometimes saying nothing means the most. Silence can hold a lot of meaning. I really like the concept and the short lines. It's writen in a unique way..and I like that. Great work! =] keep it up. |
by Rachel RTVW
I like the structure of this poem except: |
by H E Losey
Very nice write! I would enjoy seeing you continueing you scheme of last word leading off next stanza, I guess I prefer continuity. But in the end I do enjoy this piece. |
by Shinobi
This poem is unique in it's writing. Almost every last word of a stanza opens the following one. There are no rhymes, but guess it's your style. The words carry a strong message, and I liked how you played with them. |
by Vanessa
Nicely written |