Again this was beautiful. I love the style, It interests me because it's quite similar to the etheree. You always pull of styles nicely I admire that in your work. I love how you started this it was almost dark and eerie though you ended it warm and loving. The contrast between this was flawless. Another piece I adore from you. Amazing. ~Mel

Ooh. Very well written. Youve had talent for a while. =D

Wow, this is truly beautiful, portrayed with deeply touching tones. Great nonet! I like the imagery that you created, it's very intense and vivid. Emotions are overwhelming in the whole poem. I can relate to this piece in a way.
Greatly written!

Wow I must admit I'm normally not a big fan of structured poetry, I don't know why but I just seem to rebel againsed rules. the way you have said so much here in so few words all while staying within the confines of a set of rules leaves me in awe of your talent. This poem really touched my heart.

It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.

Very nice poem.a wonderful nonet.5