by Not
Aww this is such a sad poem the first stanza is great which is gd cus it made me finish the poem which was great..keep writing!!...=)..5/5 |
by Blissful
First off, I loved the title! It really captured my attention and I was curious to read more. The thing that stuck to me the most here was your flawless use of imagery ... you really hooked me in as the reader and I was left wanting more. |
I really like this one my favorite part was: |
by Tammie
This is a unique poem, I like the meaning beneath it and the emotion you portrayed throughout is very fluid. I think that it did go on a bit, but I was interested the whole way through. |
Wow... I love this write from the beginning to the end. You expressed emotions on a great way. |
by Nix
I will be totally honest in this comment. I just want to tell that this is just my personal opinion and I don't want to offend you with anything. |
by Gasttlee
So much pain was spread throughout this whole piece. I can relate to this so much. Wow! That was beautiful. 5/5 |
by ABake
I'd say it is about time that I comment this. I will be off to do the other one later tonight. I must say, I love this title. For a sad poem ecspecially, definintly [sp] caught my eye. So on to the wonderful job of commenting (: |
That was brilliant expressed and written with such emotion you younger people have obviously got alot on yolur minds. Enjoy your life mate you only live once and have confidence in everything you do. You are very talented you dont just flicker when it comes to poetry. x |
by Im not broken anymore
Wow steven this is amazing!!! You are the best poet i have ever met your poems are so amazing and inspiring.. Great job!!! 5/5 |
by Sora
This poem was beyond beautiful..it was fantastic!! |
by Rey Severs
I really like this poem...it has so much meaning...excellent work! I cried as well.... |
-Do I lack the fire? |
by Chloe DeWitt
Okay, Two words for this poem. Absolutely Amazing! :) |
I can see why this is your favourite. |
Thank you very much :D It is through poetry you understand me, and perhaps through poetry that people understand you! Perhaps that's why some people around you don't understand you! |