"my lifes moving forward
while your standing still..

dont say it will be ok
cause i know it wont..
""""

thats sorta contradictive?
:P

maybe you should change it around...

other lives are moving forward,
mine is standing still......

cos its like a negative poem.. but yuu got a positive in there........

apart from that great poem :D

4.5/5 so ill round it up to 5