I don't know what i make of it. my mind is still swelling on all your words, they're resounding over and over in my head. It certainly has impact.

It's very good, easilly to envisage and place myself in your midset and it leaves a lasting impression on you.

This is something i can relate to....it speaks strong emotions and darkness that only you can see and hear but nobody else knows...just you. this is truelly amazing and very good keep up the great work

<I'v witnessed things my soul can't bear
lived a life few would dare,>

^^ I loved those lines. The entire poem was amazing and so powerful. I love the imagery you've employed and the feelings you have conveyed. You are a great poet. :) Don't stop, ever.

<Inked upon my skin are skulls,
each with names of friend and foes.
I pay no mind to what they say
they move their mouthes
what noise they make.>

^^ What a beautiful stanza! Truly cleared my mind and made me think.

5/5

Bri~

I dont really no how to put. but that it really good. thats my fav. out of all of them!

I really appreciated the comments you dropped for my poems so thought i would check out your stuff. and its pretty awesome :P so you're now added to my favourites. really good stuff, this poem includes such beautiful lines

If this be the confession.. we all should make! n may all be absolved !!!

T