WOW! That was so phenomenal. Beautifully written with so much emotion. At first I wasn't sure but I kept reading... and the end was just so sad. So powerful. You have talent girl! Keep it up

Wow
this is great
added it to my fav poems
and i only have 2
wicked job
omg it was awesome
plz stop me gushing now
5/5
xx

Wow this is an amazing poem. im definately teary eyed. keep it up you have skills at this.

It was awesome!!!
great job !! 5/5

Wow
i was almost crying by the end
so so sad
but so so good
wow

keep up the great work

kelsey xx

p.s the thing about matt in your profile is so so cute and i know what you mean when you talk about the feelings you have for him .

5/5

Wow!
dat is one of the lest poems ive eva read,
i loved it!
5/5
wow, rlly rlly grest
:p

Absolutely amazing! is it based off of anything true? i hope not! anywho, beautiful poem

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. The feeling in this showed a lot and the flow was just right. I've never read poem so amazing as this. You did a great job! 5/5 <---wish I could give it more.

.:CiNdY:.

That was a really said poem. I actually liked how it didn't rhyme or go in a certain flow. I think it works for this poem. There were a few mistakes:

and it wont go away
^^Wont should be won't.

o how it feels so good, but
^^O should be oh.

and thats all I need before I pass
^^Thats should be that's.

and thats all I need before I pass
^^I'm not sure what that is suppose to say. Pass out maybe?

and thats when I said
^^Thats should be that's.

Great job!
Cayce xx

Wow.
You are an amazing writer.
This made me tear up.
I'm glad my dad isnt like that
But i wish yours wasnt like that either.
I hope your relationship with him becomes better.
Much love
Brittany

Dang that was AMAZING:)!!!!! I abselutly loved it!
keep it up :)

nanaz!

Wow so emotional and sad but written well very good

Well, for starters, the poem was
kind of a mess. Parts rhymed and
others didn't. Now, I'm not a fan of
free verse but to make the free verse
more readable you could have made
each line about the same sylables, that
makes it more easier to read. You didn't
really use your imagination with this,
kinda of a cliche poem. YOu have a lot
a grammar problems in here which
didn't help either. Just keep trying you're
only begining. I am just helping out.
I perfer not to vote becuase I don't want to
break you're 5.0 streak and I don't think this poem is 5.0.
<3Tay
Keep trying.

Wowww. this was a great piece. i loved every single word. im like totally speechless. wow it was beauitful yet sad. and you can really make your words come to life, i could almost picture it all in my head. fantastic! i loved this piece. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.