by Idiosyncratic Jan 22, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
Is it creative desire that sparks our engineering |
by BlueJay
I really liked the personality and voice in this piece, the flow was also done pretty well. As much as I liked this piece though, I feel like something is missing; I just dont know what it is. could be a personal side note but thought I'd throw it out there. |
I thought overall it was pretty decent, it had amazing flow throughout. I thought some of your rhymes were forced and the face you used tight and then tighter two lines in a row. |