The greatest love of all

by Ryley B   Jan 22, 2008


Along the ridges of uncertainty
Along the passion of vanity
I have found the greatest love of all
Along the smiles of a small innocent
Along the cries of a needed one
I have found the greatest love of all
True love
True devotion
For now I am a part
Now I am one
Along the road of life
I have finally know what is to be complete
For with you
The greatest love of all is possible

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Very touching and very sweet.
    "I have finally know what is to be complete
    For with you
    The greats love is possible"

    it sounds as though it would flow better as
    "I know now what it is to be complete
    For with you
    The greatest love of all is possible"

    great work! makes me want to find the greatest love of all!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This poem is meaningful in so many ways!! great writing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I can't belive this poem has no previous votes or comments. Apart from the odd spelling mistake it is very well written. You're lucky to have found your greatest love. Great one. 5/5