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by jLegendc   Jan 22, 2008


Falling for you is not what I had planned,
That is something I just don't understand,
But this is what my heart commands,
So take my hand,
And together we'll explore this land...

Before you came,
I shut myself from falling for someone
to escape pain,
And promised myself to play the same game,
And be a player in that game, I should remain,
But why can't I get you off my brain?

It's funny how things work out,
You've suddenly became someone I can't live without,
There I said it,
Without any doubt,
So there's no need for me to shout...

It's true that we've all been hurt before,
But it doesn't matter anymore,
Please don't be scared and take a chance,
Because this is why our hearts are made for,
So take this risks for an unexpected romance...

This should be a start of something new,
But it won't start for someone is still holding you,
I don't have to tell you what to do,
The decision that makes you happy is up to you...

Last night you told me I'm found in you heart,
And he is found in your mind,
You know there will be one of us to be left behind,
But I'm not telling you that you should be mine...

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  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Good. Portrays a good story with good emotion. My only problem is although changing the rhyme scheme at the end works, you changed it in stanza 4 and then went back to the way it was in 5. It makes the poem not quite an easy read. Like one of those 'something-is-wrong-but-I-can't-put-my-finger-on-it' moments. Otherwise it was good. 4/5 ^.^

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    "Last night you told me I'm found in you heart,
    And he is found in your mind,
    You know there will be one of us to be left behind,
    But I'm not telling you that you should be mine... "

    This is my favorite stanza ^^\

    Also in the second stanza remain, brain, it seemed a little forced rhyming there to, but all in all the flow was nice and again a very nice yearning love poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    OMG another great write! You have to go on my "Favorite Authors" list! Perfectly written 5/5
    =}

    PrElUdE 2 A KiSs

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a sad and very wisdomable ( not a word0 poem, it had great depth and flow 5/5

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