by jLegendc Jan 22, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Falling for you is not what I had planned, |
by RobinAnn13
Good. Portrays a good story with good emotion. My only problem is although changing the rhyme scheme at the end works, you changed it in stanza 4 and then went back to the way it was in 5. It makes the poem not quite an easy read. Like one of those 'something-is-wrong-but-I-can't-put-my-finger-on-it' moments. Otherwise it was good. 4/5 ^.^ |
"Last night you told me I'm found in you heart, |
by KJ
OMG another great write! You have to go on my "Favorite Authors" list! Perfectly written 5/5 |
Wow a sad and very wisdomable ( not a word0 poem, it had great depth and flow 5/5 |