Wow a sad and very wisdomable ( not a word0 poem, it had great depth and flow 5/5

OMG another great write! You have to go on my "Favorite Authors" list! Perfectly written 5/5
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"Last night you told me I'm found in you heart,
And he is found in your mind,
You know there will be one of us to be left behind,
But I'm not telling you that you should be mine... "

This is my favorite stanza ^^\

Also in the second stanza remain, brain, it seemed a little forced rhyming there to, but all in all the flow was nice and again a very nice yearning love poem. 5/5

Good. Portrays a good story with good emotion. My only problem is although changing the rhyme scheme at the end works, you changed it in stanza 4 and then went back to the way it was in 5. It makes the poem not quite an easy read. Like one of those 'something-is-wrong-but-I-can't-put-my-finger-on-it' moments. Otherwise it was good. 4/5 ^.^