by Amy
Holy cow...this is a GREAT poem!!! Wow...it's so....touching.....great job!!! I have felt like that.....and it sucks. I'm so sorry!! Anyway this was awesome!! GREAT JOB!!! |
by Carrie
Wow! Just WOW! |
by Roula
hey whats up this was a really good poem but and i can relate to the feelings but not the actions... i write poems about suicide and i always say that its the only solution for problems, but after thinking about it deeply i dont think its the only solution...there is too much out there in this world that need our attention and we can't end our life for every single obstacle...life is beautiful and precious so we must not end it no matter what because we come to this life only once, and we shouldn't waste it all away for a moment of depression .... anyway if u wanna talk about it send me a private e-mail i'm a good listener for these kind of situations :) |
by Toni
Hey, thankyou all SO much for ur commentz!! It meanz such a lot! And no caitlin you didnt get on my nerves! If any of u wanna chat about stuff to me jus email me at antoniagregory@hotmail.com, take care all xxxx |
by Tashan
Great poem. I've had the same experience. I also had 4 failed attempts but three years later after seeing so many great things and meeting all these new people, I'm glad it didn't happen. I wrote about it in a poem called I Made It and my suicide poem was Dead End Road (they're both on the site). I'm glad you and I got a chance to realize things DO get better and I hope everyone else realizes that no matter how bad it is...there are NO exceptions....everyone is meant to get through it and it seems like there's no one but there is....GUARANTEED and I hope everyone understands and realizes it. Believe me, when you've gotten through it and time passes, u look back and realize what you would have missed! Sorry this is so long he he :) Awesome poem. |
by Annai
your poem is very pretty and i geuss we have gone though the same things and i just wanted to tell you that your poem is very touching and i send you the best of luck no everything you do |
by Annai
your poem is very pretty and i geuss we have gone though the same things and i just wanted to tell you that your poem is very touching and i send you the best of luck no everything you do |
by Ecstasy
damn that was one hell of a poem, nice goin, i loved it and u've got lotsa talent. keep writin, and im sure u hav changged lotsa ppl's opinion about suicide...(5) even though u deserve much more then jus a 5. |
by stephalee
wow this is good and sad that this happened i know what its like i almost commited suiced but backed out on it and i was proud of myself u should be proud too u survived death |
Such a good poem hun ({) things will get better, dont fight all the time but fight when you can, and you will get there in the end hun you can do it! *hugs* xxx |
by confusion
brilliant poem, flowd well and explained everything well. great write! |
nice poem, startlingly accurate and creative. like many here; writing is all we can hold on to for now. i knowit does get better, havin been here 3 times! i just been discharged from hospital for same reason, the uk sucks |
by Toni
No its not for attention. Having a suicide attempt isnt 'failing' its just when ur at the end of your thread with life....i let people know iv had 4 attempts to let ppl see that even wen u reach the bottom u can still keep fighting to get better. xx |
i can really relate to this thanks you so much |
by DeAnna
wow... that's all i can say... |
by katrina
i hope you are doing better i know it was like a year ago but i know it can keep eatin at you!!!! you are a great person and i enjoy you poems keep written.... |
by Tina
this is excaly how i feel i'm just so tired of life with everybody and how they think they know eveything and every body that got 2 put they 2 cents in evrything either they gone go or me. |
awesome write hun. I really hope you wont try to do it again though...you've got some talent keep it flowing. :) <3333 |
by CHAOTIC
I know exactly how you feel. I went through a really long and hard time this year and I didn't exactly have many friends to help me through it. But I'm glad that I didn't try anything else. I can slip into those states sometimes but I try to get out of them before they can escalate into anything more. Hang in there and keep on writing 5/5 |
by Kayla
Holy crap...amazing poem...really...wow! lol...okay i feel stupid now. I coud so totally relate but good message and with your talents of writting it is no wonder god wouldnt let you die!!! anyway...glad you pulled through it!! well great poem...luv yas mwah |