When i Look Me In The Eyes

by kylexthexmagnificent   Jan 22, 2008


I stare deeply in his saddened eyes,
his sorrowful glance makes my soul cry.
I ponder the thought of how he feels inside,
i notice his fake smile, the sorrow he tries to hide.

However, his eyes tell the truth that he conseals,
i see right through that smile, pain is what he feels.
I am saddened for his as i gaze upon his eyes,
he seems so confused with the facial expression of "why?"

Why must hardship burden the strength of our hearts?
Why must he stumble blindly in the dark??
Although he plummets and falls,
i see he still has hope even when he feels so small.

His heart still so strong and bright,
his flame of hope still lights his darkest nights.
He smiles at me as i see the connection,
i turn away smiling, stepping from the mirror,
leaving behind my reflection.....

i walk away smiling....

i havent come up with a title for this one yet...so yeah, comment and rate please. thanks!!!

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  • 15 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    Super Duper!
    I love it!
    You have sooo much talent.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Your poems are so captivating. I wish I was as good of a writer as you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Omg amazing truly gorgeous. Your a brilliant writer. I've never read a poem that hold so much emotion as this. Just amazing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelynn

    This is a good one keep up the good work, it shows alot of feelings, and how the person feels......

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Dang...holy sprinkles! i love that. that is by far the deepest meaning of any poem ive read. 5/5 *if i could id rate more!*

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