When I First Met You

by Sweet Little Lie   Jan 22, 2008


When I first met you,
you made me see,
that forever was possible for you and me.
You gazed into my eyes,
and touched my heart,
and now it hurts when we're apart.
When you caress my skin,
I get chills down my spine,
I can't believe that you are mine.
I wish you knew,
Whats on my mind,
Cos my love for you is strong and kind.
6 weeks now passed,
and times have been tough,
my love I hope is more than enough.
My hearts belongs to one,
and now my poem is done,
I want you to know that you are the one.

About Louis my second love x

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rin

    Something your poems have in comment is that they are very heartfelt and leaves no doubt that you've actually felt this way. Their very well written. Applause from me.

    And for this poem; you almost make me want the things you describe - that I normally don't want. Which is another proof that your not bad at this writing-thing ;)

    >> Rin <<

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I can see that you write your poems fille your true feelings and i liked this about you. i think i will read all of your poems today ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Very interesting rhyme pattern. I liked it very much. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by m i s s k a t e l y n

    Aw, this is really cute :]

    <3katelyn..

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