Aw, this is really cute :]

<3katelyn..

Very interesting rhyme pattern. I liked it very much. 5/5

I can see that you write your poems fille your true feelings and i liked this about you. i think i will read all of your poems today ^_^

Something your poems have in comment is that they are very heartfelt and leaves no doubt that you've actually felt this way. Their very well written. Applause from me.

And for this poem; you almost make me want the things you describe - that I normally don't want. Which is another proof that your not bad at this writing-thing ;)

>> Rin <<