You are a good poet my good sir.
but right down here.....

I wonder if I dreamed of you-
If you would appear?
To make my nights full of love,
And always hold me near
^^^^
this kind of confused me. but as i read the rest of the poem i understood

I wonder if I thought of you-
If you would feel it in your soul?
Like two spirits in the universe,
Who always seem to know
^^^
but then you picked it up with this amazing stanza. i love it boy