Wow!!! this poem is sooo good!! i love it!! its a sad story but very emotional...great job Taryn, =) love it

This poem expressed pain so well that it made me shed a tear. ];
Amazing job. [:

So sad and filled with emotion!! this sounds so powerful!! beautiful!! :):)

5 most definately...and thanks for commenting/voting on my poem Every Night
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Aww. Powerful poem. Definitely sad.

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I understand this poem very well. Brilliant ending. 5/5

Wow, this poem was very good! very powerful and beautifuly writen. keep it up!