I absolutely love it, you see you put thought in it, but that the emotions and feelings keep important to you. You show what you mean clearly.

Wow. okay, i am adding htis poem to my favorites!... nuff said!

5/5

Great title, drew me in right away.
It was a fast read, the words flowed together well.
I really liked this one because it let me sort of see what was happening, like a scene in a movie.
:)
Also, thank you for your comment.

This was sooo great! the best read yet! It wasn't dry... it wasn't boring it was magnificant! I love love love it! its on my fav's 4 sure=]