Demons

Not bad for a short poem. The punctuation is a little off, but that's easy to fix.

I like the starting lines, naming the demons after the things they do to you, or put you through.

It is a dark poem, which is good considering it's labeled under dark. It could have been a little more creative, but it's good nevertheless.

This poem is very deep. i can feel the emotion behind it. i love it 5/5 your an amazing poet. i hope to read more of your poems.

We have alot in common. but i show my feelings of pain and hatred in my poems. they are really great though

We have a lot in common i love your poems

I know these demons well, you describe them very well.