Comments : Demons

  • 16 years ago

    by xxlightedbydarknessxx

    Awesome poem

  • Short but really good.The flow was great and the rhyming was pretty good.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    Cool i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I know these demons well, you describe them very well.

  • We have a lot in common i love your poems

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    We have alot in common. but i show my feelings of pain and hatred in my poems. they are really great though

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very deep. i can feel the emotion behind it. i love it 5/5 your an amazing poet. i hope to read more of your poems.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Not bad for a short poem. The punctuation is a little off, but that's easy to fix.

    I like the starting lines, naming the demons after the things they do to you, or put you through.

    It is a dark poem, which is good considering it's labeled under dark. It could have been a little more creative, but it's good nevertheless.