Blood as cold as ice

by xxlightedbydarknessxx   Jan 22, 2008


I feel my heart beating
its beating but I'm not breathing
i am in a cold sweat
alone in this room
shaking with fear
awaiting my doom
death is upon my lips
and i see nothing but wandering mice
i feel something painful stake my heart
now my blood is as cold as ice

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  • 16 years ago

    by tamara

    Really good :) i love it.
    hehe i havent been on here in forever i stopped writing poems because i was happy now im mad/ sad so might start writing again

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    I liked it. Especially the ending. You can almost see it happening. Short but it has meaning. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    This is really good. This is one of my favs. Oh and please comment some of my stuff. Keep up the awsome work

    Yours truely,

    -mello-193-

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great poem... keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by thememorythathurts

    Omg i love it to its co
    cool well its ok but still i like it :p
    good job 5/5

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