Mordent Salvo Of 1776

by SilentRebuke   Jan 22, 2008


Why do poets paint war as a hero's treat?
And how can its silence be so deafening?
The steady march of men's feet,
The slight grating of sword on scabbard.

Nothing voiced, throats hoarse with emotions
Thinking of wives and families left behind.
What impact and value is all this commotion?
Is it worth starving far from home?

As the battle lines are drawn,
and brothers stand on opposing sides
Shivering in silence, snow christening the dawn
Each man praying they will taste victory today.

War fervor has corroded these poor minds
Has confused the voice within
Carried them far down the path that winds
Walking toward death, fighting for a mere whim.

The silence erupts into a hungry flame
As a salvo of cartridge swallows the field.
And when all is over who will take the blame?
For the rivers of blood melting ice and snow?

~Not my best work, but this was written for a personal writing challenge.

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  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I like this because I always hate how they portray war like the men are honorable because they are fighting for a reason, when actually they are risking there lives for men.

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow wow wow!!! That was amazing! Forget writer's block honey cause this is incredible. Beautiful piece...definately one of my favorites-not just from you but of all. Keep it up hun! :)
    ~Jules

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Very intriguing piece and a unique rhyme scheme! Makes you think about war and why anyone does it to begin with. You really draw the reader in with your opening question. And your last stanza ends strong as well!
    Charisma*

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