by Gasttlee
"Stars shall crumble to dust as wind blows through air, |
by Kaila
Awww. I am so picturing me in this poem! haha it was so cute I wish moments like this existed for me. If your writing this from experience you are super duper lucky! I loved this poem though. Nothing really I would change at all. |
by Nix
-Drift throughout the atmosphere toxic melody will arise, |
I thought this was a very deep poem, the emotion was great, and i loved the scene you created in this, it was very easy to imagine, i loved it very much, 5/5 |
Wow... I'm speechless and I need a moment for my brain to start functioning again... |
Very beautiful and sweet poem. |
by Blissful
The imagery truly stood out to me in this piece. It was captivating and kept my attention. This truly was a unique piece and the words you choise to use fit the poem perfectly. The flow was flawless as usual and I loved how beautifully sweet this was ... it left me wanting more. Each line was just amazing and there was not one line I liked because all of it was wonderful. Well done *5/5* |