An intersting poem it was kinda like two in one i liked it though very unique I liked the second half more the randomness from the part was great 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Amazing poem, it is very deep , it truly seems that you wrote about other topic in some lines of the second stanza but it still has so captivating atmosphere and idea for whole piece is so remarkable!
I love the way you wrote it, with such passion, you expressed your self on a fantastic way, well done!