I'd Walk On Broken Glass To Be With You

by Melpomene   Jan 23, 2008


I'd move earth to hold you in a sweet embrace...

My heart strings play a melody like elegant cords to violin,
It's sweet I shall admit, Though sorrow does play within tune,
I miss you like the scent of summer distant while in winter,
Yet I yearn for you in opposite all the way throughout June.

I'd stop lightening to view the glow in your eyes...

My bones hold an ache such as one from a seasonal cold,
The chill up an old spine gets deeper with your very thought,
The only warmth I've come to feel is the one from burning fire,
Yet even that feels dim, Within snow my body becomes caught.

I'd battle thunder to hear the beauty of your voice...

Autumns leave drift calmly, What beauty orange seems to be,
Entwined with brown from your eye color how I hold on dearly,
"Come back to me" I'll whisper into a breeze of our memory's,
Though I know you'll be home soon, know I love you sincerely.

I'd walk through fire to kiss those lips once again...

....And I know you'd do the same for me..

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    WOW. thats what i have to say. good job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw another very effectionate love poem.
    Such beautiful words you put in here.
    You're such an amazing writer.
    Keep up the great work.
    5/5
    <3tay

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    Another one breathtaking write from you. The depths of this piece are priceless. Very heartfelt, touching poem, truly superbly written. I like your descriptions in every stanza, and the ending is absolutely fantastic and truly outstanding. The feelings in this poem are expressed greatly. I especially like the first stanza because it is endlessly deep and so original.
    Overall, amazingly done!

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Very very beautiful. i thought it was very heartfelt and i wish i could write like that...must be nice to have those words floating in your head. anywho, thanks for bringing light into the world

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    A-Mazing. Yet again. This blew me away with the love it held and the heartfelt words you wrote. I love how you spoke of the seasons, and the lines in between each stanza's were beautifully described of your sacrifice for him. I love the ending, how you know that he feels the same and it will all be okay. A really beautifully heartfelt poem. I can't wait to be able to write one like this for someone I fall in love with. :]

    I also come to check to see who on my favourites has written new poetry every day that I am home. Although I don't always comment, I do read it. Just sometimes I'm not in such a commenting mood, if you know how I mean.

    Anyway, your comment again meant a lot to me, and I love your work too. It is truely amazing. :] 5/5

    Tammie xo

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