WOW I LOVED THE LAST LINE PURE BEAUTY and I also liked the nature usage too nice, could you read my latest two 5/5

Amazing. This is exactly how I feel right now. I wish I could have written this poem it's flawless! You are an amazing writer and have great talent. My favorite lines were:
I'd stop lightening to view the glow in your eyes...

My bones hold an ache such as one from a seasonal cold,
The chill up an old spine gets deeper with your very thought,
The only warmth I've come to feel is the one from burning fire,
Yet even that feels dim, Within snow my body becomes caught.
The way you expressed those were awesome!
5/5. Kaila

Wow, intertwined passion and beauty of this piece impressed me. Every line is filled with so honest, touching emotions and I must say I think that you are one of the poets on this site that use most unqiue rhymes. Your rhyming is not typical, it is very refreshing and it always help you to build fantastic rhythm of the poem so you did great job with rhymes. Whole piece is breath-taking and emotions that you expressed in it are moving and overwhelming. Bravo, amazing poem.

Aww this is so cute! I cant wait to be in love like that!!
You have a gift for writing poems so beautifully, whether it's a sad//dark poem, or a love poem!! Keep writing hun!! :)

Take care!!

It's sweet I shall admit, Though sorrow does play within tune,
I miss you like the scent of summer distant while in winter,

favorite part ^^

I thought this part was the best out of the whole poem. All together, it was amazing, well desrved 5/5

A-Mazing. Yet again. This blew me away with the love it held and the heartfelt words you wrote. I love how you spoke of the seasons, and the lines in between each stanza's were beautifully described of your sacrifice for him. I love the ending, how you know that he feels the same and it will all be okay. A really beautifully heartfelt poem. I can't wait to be able to write one like this for someone I fall in love with. :]

I also come to check to see who on my favourites has written new poetry every day that I am home. Although I don't always comment, I do read it. Just sometimes I'm not in such a commenting mood, if you know how I mean.

Anyway, your comment again meant a lot to me, and I love your work too. It is truely amazing. :] 5/5

Tammie xo

Very very beautiful. i thought it was very heartfelt and i wish i could write like that...must be nice to have those words floating in your head. anywho, thanks for bringing light into the world

Wow...
Another one breathtaking write from you. The depths of this piece are priceless. Very heartfelt, touching poem, truly superbly written. I like your descriptions in every stanza, and the ending is absolutely fantastic and truly outstanding. The feelings in this poem are expressed greatly. I especially like the first stanza because it is endlessly deep and so original.
Overall, amazingly done!

Aw another very effectionate love poem.
Such beautiful words you put in here.
You're such an amazing writer.
Keep up the great work.
5/5
<3tay

WOW. thats what i have to say. good job. 5/5