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this is going to be like...in a poetry book in the future when your dead and kids are going to be STUDYING its awesomeisity

xx

Wow...
I love this piece from the beginning to the end. Every stanza is filled with emotions and truly excellently written. You did great job with rhymes and created very unique rhythm through the poem.
Feelings are expressed superbly. I like the atmosphere that you created, too.
I can choose my favorite stanza, every part of this piece is equally fantastic.
Keep writing!
5/5 from me

"Beware, beware, hold fast, hold true!"
I whispered this, but this you knew
Day by day and through and through,
Love is blind as I'm blind for you.

that is literally like....my favourite verse of poetry in the world, lol.im serious!
i LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem!!!

but not as much as I LOVE YOU!