Comments : Confetti Sunshine (Ode)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very beautiful and touching from the beginning to the end. Truly great ode, filled with emotions.
    The title is eye-catching and the whole atmosphere that you created is lovely.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - She sprinkled my time with an abundance of joy,
    Confetti sunshine dancing within my mind,
    And with the power to demolish she never destroys,
    A poetic goddess and timeless teacher combined.-
    ^^
    Effective ending. I like your choice of words and whole atmosphere created here.
    All in all, wonderful friendship piece.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Wonderful expression, the flow showed the meaning of perfection. A well written ode and with a storyline that warmed my heart. This poem was overflowing with love and heartfelt emotion earning it a 5/5 and the winning poem of the contest. Congratulations again!

  • 16 years ago

    by K R ii S T ii N A

    Good
    Keep Iit Up!
    X - x

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow great job
    beautiful poem indeed i loved the flow. the choice of words were strong and beautiful at the same time.

    it's nice to have friends like her/him and it's nice to have you as friend since you appreciate what others do for you :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I hope to see a lot more from you.