Although I can't explain why Ilike it , because I miss a good flow and so , I do have a feeling about it,
good poem, keep it up .

I'm going to hazzard a guess that you are quite the rebel Yuja, for this poem itself (I think) speaks volumes for your character. Speak Not! Against anything for fear of being reprimanded and suffering the consequences.

Freedom of speech is so highly sought, yet, speaking out about certain things is the one thing we are told our entire lives not to do.
Fickle is the society we live in today.

Another thought-provoking and innovative piece Yuja.

~Pete.